Young Adult Fantasy novel, forbidden teacher student love
Bad: problematic of love sequences by setting some character(s) at age 12 or so (same happens in 一騎絕塵 and plenty anime), even they don’t grow old, supposedly already 17/18.
- continuity, edit problems
- repeated dialogs
- TV – bite neck to suck blood scene removed. it is in the opening sequence.
- choice of character for king character – those giant nose nostrils is distracting, why choose that actor, he is not that good either.
- differences from book – failing of the goddess is superficial – mostly the dark mark on forehead
- very rush ending – return to temple, how to resurrect, only by dialog
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